Monday, May 30, 2011

Describing Poems

This week we are looking at words which describe nouns... adjectives. We are writing poems using these words!
Today we all wrote about cats...tomorrow we get o choose our own topic!

Here are some awesome efforts from Room 4 poets

Cats
Licking paws
Loud miaowing
Lazy sleeping in the sun
Tall long tails
Cat are all around in my home.

Rebecca

Kittens
Soft and smooth fur
Hissing and scratching
Playing quickly with their toys
Tiny little kittens
I love kittens

Antonia

Kittens
Soft kittens
Cute and fluffy
Sleepy and colourful
Long whiskers
Strong paws
Cries miaow for food or attention
Kittens are strong
They lick their fur slowly
I love kittens

Lorilee

15 comments:

  1. Great poems Rebecca, Antonia and Lorilee. They are very descriptive. Well done.
    Michelle (Callum's mum) :o)

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  2. Andrew Knight (School Council)June 2, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Hi Rm4
    You guys have 6 out of 16 comments.

    Cheers
    Andrew Knight :p

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  3. great poems! hope to read more. Kelli

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  4. Andrew Knight (School Council)June 6, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    Hi Room4

    You guys are 2nd equal with Rm2.
    You have 10 to go.
    Good luck.

    Cheers

    ATK SC

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  5. Great poems girls, I like cats too! Kelli

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  6. I suggest that room 4 puts more photos on your blog! Kelli

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  7. Do you have cats/kittens at home girls? we have a cat called Bubbles, she is a very cool cat. Kelli

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  8. Has anyone written a poem about dogs? Kelli

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  9. I really like your poems, Riley Bell (Gracies brother)

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  10. Good morning room 4, hope you have a lovely day. happy learning! Kelli

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  11. Hello Room 4, how was your day? i see you have a lot of comments now! well done. Kelli

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  12. Room 4 kids are really cool,
    because they go to Bradford school!
    they are kind and helpful little ones
    who like to have lots of fun!
    your art and writing is great room 4
    can wait to see you all do more!

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  13. LOTS OF COMMENTS ROOM 4. AM LOOKING FORWARD TO HEARING ABOUT YOUR DANCING. MS.D X

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  14. Lovely poems. from Grace's Grandpa Jim

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  15. not good superb WELL DONE GIRLS!!!

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